All Comments on 'The Log Cabin Ch. 01'

I shouldn't be laughing but I am. Gave the story 5*

Nice twist! Can't wait to see what happens next.

After talking with my editor, Daddy's beauty, I think this probably should have been in erotic horror. Anyway it was put up before I could switch it or do her edits.

Let me know what you think.

Nice solid lead-in, great character development, fantastic perspective shifts, then....POW! One of the best plot twists I've seen in a long time.

I eagerly await the continuation of this story!

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WOW!! that was not a turn i expected!!! i'm off to read the rest!! thanks for the surprise!!!

Very interesting beginning.

Very well written - good start