by StoryTellingMom
Your story was very very hot! I enjoy the genre and your story line. I would like to read more from you. Will there be any more chapters?
This was SO hot and erotic! Will there be more chapters? I certainly hope so.
The original had build-up, tension, an actual story, multiple vignettes and story-within-story moments, and the sex is much, much better described, while this is nothing but a throwaway, single-page orgy scene. 1 star for being so derivative it's not even funny, and for being too short to be worth bookmarking. 2/10, try harder next time.
I have to say that this story was short but a great read. I hope to see more about this club
Reading it was like I was there too , Have done it with my son too
I Enjoyed Every Word! Their Sons Have No Idea Who Got The Best Deal Here! How About Some Recreational Spanking?
Great stuff, made me cum hard! Adore how submissive the moms are, would love to see more gangbang stuff involving them
The writing is quite hot, but this genre requires tension and character development. Simply describing an orgy and saying that those present are mothers and sons doesn't make it work.
What a load of CRAP! Pick a new hobby and give us a break.