All Comments on 'The Loners Ch. 18'

Story is coming along nicely and very interesting! Hopefully the next chapter comes soon! :)

(but don't rush it.. plot, and then quality writing are very important!)

Your killing me!!

Post more! Quick!

Man do I hate the standard 3 day wait -.-

i really hope he transforms mid fight into a badass super vampire. Anyway, loving the story so much. Waiting eagerly for the next part

youre a butt munch! Cutting off the action just as it was getting good. Just like most animes. But you know no one is going anywhere til this is done!

Just to alert everyone, if Irene decideds to demolish everything, including power, there probably will be a delay in the next chapter getting out. Hopefully that won't happen, but, just in case it does, I'm letting you know.

I look forward to the next chapter thats for sure. I wish you the best with Irene too, Ozma.

ive noticed about a week or less wait between chapters does this mean that ill be able to stop agonizing over whats going to happen by next monday? btw fking awesome story altho it seems he aint dracula atm would have loved him to just turn up and kick all the american lords ass' for the hell of it

It's nice to see them standing their ground now. Although it's sad to see that things have come to Alan turning and going down a dark path too. And as for him becoming dracula, I would be up for it only if there is a good reason behind it. I want Alan's dark, vengeful side to continue only to the point of Caleb getting taken out. After that, if Alan (or Rachel or whoever) becomes dracula, I want him to do something good with that power like finding a way for vampires to feed without killing or something like that. I for one would be kinda disappointed if the story just ended with Alan becoming a stone-cold dracula simply for the sake of making him a badass. In my opinion that's too much for a far cry from his original character. That's just me though. Anyway, good story.

i don't see why people think that becoming a vampire is always something as bad as a unforgivable sin or something. I'm kinda with the author on this one. I think becoming a vampire would be fucking awesome. Good job so far.

Love the story!