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Yeeeaaahhh!!! And also, oh fuck.

Lovely to see another fantastic story. Somewhat silly and slightly annoying to notice there are either bots or trolls on the site that automatically downvote amazing stories. One vote for 1 star on a story like this is two votes too many. If someone actually hated a story like this they couldn't finish it, and you are certainly not one of the spam authors.

Enough of that though. Looking forward to more story with Miss Who'i'am, the theoretical child (at least within my own parlance) of Rob Miles, and the first of this sites obligatory (though thoroughly welcomed) horny little thing. Thank you for another amazing part 01, you and yours Be well. 6/5 stars xD

PS Language is hard. In the above ^ I am referring to 3 seperate entities, just as a clarification to an overly complicated set of jargon. My apologies.

I generally dislike confusing starts to a story, as you get no grip on the storyline.

And boy was this confusing, loads of stuff that basically had zero cohesion.

How ever, I will give you a chance.

As you might stitch it together in the next chapter..

Hot Damn!!! 5*

What a ride, Dragon!

Hmm, intriguing. I can only hope this is set to be a very long tale, given that you've set up so many different threads. I would have liked this chapter to be a fair bit longer itself, just so we could solidify each storyline. You've given a lot of interesting science fiction intros, but not actually explained the workings of any of them, save perhaps the last.

The start was way too confusing, I didn't even make it past the first page.

Don't worry, Abio Student, I have a feeling in my bones...this is gonna be a long one.

I think each patreon member got their own section. Thus so many story lines and so little story.

lol, my patreons just vote on what I write, not how I write it, Anon

wow, what a great start,,, love this story