All Comments on 'The Long Weekend - Day 04'

by Shaima32

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Hope There's More

This story has been amazing and sweet. I really hope you post more.

TSreaderTSreaderabout 7 years ago
Very sweet!

It's wonderful how you brought them together in love! I hope you'll bring more of this story to us! Thank you!

Alexia50Alexia50about 7 years ago
great story

Hope their journey will together.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 7 years ago
Love this story!

Please, at least one more. I need to know how things turn out. Thank you for sharing this with us!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
More... Or Else!

Or else we will track you down and steal your jaffle irons!

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Randee2058Randee2058almost 7 years ago
UNFINISHED

This is obvious to all those that have read this story this is unfinished . Please be merciful and finish the story .🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 dozen roses and

5🌟's

LinneaLundinLinneaLundinalmost 7 years ago
Thanks For The Tears

I always love a HEA story, but this one is my favorite. All of the character building and detail were great. The slow and sensuous buildup leading to the tender love making between these two women kept me enthralled throughout. I love the social issues, the Aussie history, and all of the other interesting things you weaved into the story. Thank you for the look into this love story.

AnyMooseAnyMooseover 6 years ago
Please don't leave us wanting more!

This can only be improved with at least one more chapter. Does Lindsay go to London or does Melina return to Oz?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Thank you

There is a tenderness in your stories which is amazing. Your high marks speak for themselves but you show us how lovemaking can be a way to communicate (and not just grunt and shoot).

Sign me romantic older man

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 3 years ago
Fab ..... Another lovely story

Hmmmm, so wonderful and yes sometimes life can be turn you upside down or inside out ..... Great tell tale and so well written touchy

Paddy57Paddy57about 3 years ago
Lovely!

Good story nicely told!

skillmanskillmanover 2 years ago

I love this story, have read it twice in the last 6 months. Write more love the characters

deepred53deepred53about 2 years ago

One of my favorites.

okami1061okami1061almost 2 years ago

The longer your stories, the better they are.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

So sweet and lovely.

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