All Comments on 'The Longest Road Pt. 01'

do please continue ,this is developing rather nicely and i want to read more .

Assuming that the young man getting sodomized by the priestvis Paul, & Monique is the trans woman fired - its not clear & a bit confusing but if I'm correct in my assumptions about the protagonists, there's some depth to this story. I'll be intetested to see whete you take it. I'd recommend getting a volunteer Literotica editor so that you'd get an objective voice to help clarify youtr narrative. I enjoyed your writing. It's got engaging charactets & a maturity often lacking in the trans stories posted here.

Not my usual thing, but something about this story has got me interested. I hope there is more soon.

I really like your story so far, please continue.. yes, gender discriminstion is such an intoletable bitch..