All Comments on 'The Looking Glass Ch. 02'

I just hope you don't go over do it.

Good read so far, keep it relatively within the bounds of reality & there's no telling where you can go with it. Good stuff.

Wonderful. and impressive also. atlast you continue this hot series. Well written. and thank you for keep my word to including some anal sex between mom son. I m the one who suggest you to keep some anal sex between mother son at first chapter. Appreciated. but don’t stop here. continue this and try some more hot anal perversion in next chapter.

hoping for part 3 with the foursome.

Good to see that the glass is not broken yet :D

Just read both chapters, unique idea to get them having sex, short and hot. Please make a chapter 3 please.

I think you've got a few people interested now, so maybe some fleshing out of the main mum and son characters, and develop their relationship. Just a thought.

ES

great story-really hot chapter

Hot story. Hope Liz and Lisa go down in each other in the next chapter.

Come on. Grander in place of grandeur? Just one outstanding use of many wrong words and misspelled words used in this chapter. Some of the misspelled words could come from trying to type to fast. If so, slow down a little. Either way, your editor is not doing you any favors. All of these mistakes are very distracting to reading your stories. You really need to work on your word skills and try to find an editor with better word skills. And then your fixation on ass holes along with the son raping his mother in the ass when she told him she didn't want that ruined the rest of of the story. You are one strange dude.

Hey 'Anonymous' of 10-3-2015, you brave devil you. So you found a misspelled word in this story and gripe about it. AND you blast the story's editor for doing a lousy job. As I have never seen one of this author's stories prior to editing, I don't know if he had 5 errors total in the original, or if he had 200 and the editor trimmed it down to just a few. And neither do you!

I DO know that proof reading is a bitch and maybe you should try it yourself. For example, you wrote, "Some of the misspelled words could come from trying to type to fast." The trouble is, YOU should have typed it as "trying to type TOO fast."

Therefore, dear brave anonymous complainer, you are indeed the pot calling the kettle black!

dezurtdawg

Looks like a foursome in the making, do your own then swap mom's.

Another great chapter, well thought out and written with lots of possibilities. I look forward to reading more. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

I like the story but do not understand why the son has no sensitivity towards the mental and emotional health of his mother. His lack of concern for his mother's self-worth, sense of self, and self-awareness is appalling and borish. He has no concern about her psychiatric nor psychological well-being. In no way do I consider his actions as being within the bounds of mutually consensual incest. With that said, I have rated this story 5 stars.

I love how this story is developing. I can see both sons fucking their moms who desire to be fucked by their two hot, hard young studs

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