All Comments on 'The Losers Ch. 01'

Not nice! You don't start a good story , then end it at the first high point!. Who does that? Well, 'to be continued',you probably won't get anyone else to read your work, knowing you don't finish anything you start. Are you like that with sex too?

XYZ

The link to the next chapter's right at the bottom of the story...sheesh.

Great story.

Oh god, the ending made me laugh so hard. Thank you for the story.