All Comments on 'The Lost Camera'

Snappy repartee, quick thinking, romance and a dumb guy, What could be better. Keep working on your style, I think you will only get better.

This is well written with very real characters. The protagonist seems super efficient at attracting the women and as a result never felt the need to have his own private one, since he could get a new one whenever he wanted. A person really has to focus his life in a way that requires a wife in order to recognize that he loves someone.

A thoroughly entertaining short story which shows that writing can be sexy without reams of gynaecological details. The characters were realistic and believable and the pace was fast without being frenetic. Thank you for a very satisfying read.

I am going to bed because I hate tear jerking good stories that get me all watered up so that I can't open my Eyes in the morning because they feel like they are glued shut.! Best all around story I have read on here in a month of Sunday's and then some.! Thanks - but it is going to be hard to yop this one.! JAG/TSO

of your writing. Style, plot-all good. Now I'll have to read all your stories.

I came across this almost by accident and found myself really enjoying the emotional development of the characters. I did feel that there is a gap in the outcome of the grandma conversation (conversation from shortly before her passing).

Outside of that, well done!

All in all, a well written story...the most realism of events gives it huge cerdibility hence strong desire to stay with it.

The sexual freedom is not typical of course but at least aggressive enough to be fascinating.

Yes, grandma's estate finalle is thin but not a big whup.

I'm guessing Miss Jenn will be an issue and if ever Elise DOES show up, there may be stress too but oh well, that can be another story!

Sometimes a good swift kick in the nuts clears your vision