All Comments on 'The Lost World: Jungle Fever'

Nice and I did enjoy this THE LOST WORLD fiction. But again, you really need to watch the show a bit closer. Characterization is the key here. Both Veronica and Ned are not that experienced in the world of love and you have 'em going at it like pros. A little slower and a bit more of a build up would be nice. Hope to read more of your LOST WORLD fiction in the future.