All Comments on 'The Lostmoon Chronicles Ch. 01'

Excellent start. I wholly agree with your statement concerning the way to start this story. Set the story line, introduce the characters and off and running. I hope this is a story that includes sex and not sex looking for a story. I have faith that you will use your writing ability to keep me on the edge of my seat and wondering what will happen next. Thanks for your time and imagination.

I really love the beginning. This has such a promising beginning and I am hoping it continues into something incredible. I really enjoyed Winters Embrace but it never continued which I understand does happen for a multitude of reasons. Please take this at least 1 or 2 more chapters before you decide if you want to end it. Sometimes it takes a couple of chapters to catch on and sometimes it catches on but lacks comments but I believe in your talent so please give it a try. Either way I want to thank you for taking the time and effort to write and post your stories. It is a talent I lack completely and I really believe that things like being any type of creative individual whether an author, musician, storyteller, etc is a gift and it is something I wish I was capable of. Stay safe and be well.

J.D.