All Comments on 'The Love Box Ch. 01'

As a life long Sci-Fi fan I find this improbable but I like where it is going.

This has possibilities, but there is absolutely nothing erotic about this chapter.

...as Rastanura says, this story might not stand up as SF but it does stand up very well as fantasy. I really felt for poor little Miri with all her insecurities, truly the geek's geek. And I empathise with her intention of flipping the bird to one and all when she leaves school for the last time. I felt exactly the same when I finished with school. Anyway, I think it'll be fun seeing where you mean to go with this story.

I like the premise so far. I just hope newer chapters come sooner rather than later. Looking forward to see where this story goes.

This subject matter (fantasy/sciFi) is not at all my cup of tea and yet I find myself intrigued by the story. You have a delightful writing style. Thanks for sharing it.