All Comments on 'The Love Bug'

Holy shit, this is very good!

I started to think there was a sixth person in the lab. Very Good Story.

I thought your story was a fun one to read. It was different and in a world of recycled ideas that is a tough one to do.

Except for the confusion between Joe & Jeff, I thoroughly enjoyed it. You must write another chapter and see where this goes.

Get yourself an editor. 😉

My apologies for the Joe/Jeff confusion. Can you believe I had an editor on this and we both missed that! I guess its what happens when you read the same story over an over even the best can miss something obvious. I feel really stupid at the moment but I have already corrected the error and will submit a new version with no Jeff :)

Similar to your story A Wedding to Remember but enough differences to make it its own story.

Many of your stories have partial endings. They end but could have used a little more. :) This is one of them. Good story.