by shy_geek
I don't mean that to be a negative at all. Please take it as a compliment.
This is a beautiful 'ROMANCE' story!!!
Each person gave up something for the greater good of the other.
Isn't that what love truly is ??
Damn, keep writing more stories like this.
Please, please, please write more stories! This story was poignant and bittersweet, yet the ending didn't leave me teary-eyed and depressed.
Just an intoxicating taste of what could have been....with too high a price. Good story!
Sensual, deeply emotional and romantic. Reminded of Heinlein's, definition of love at the end. Paraphrasing here, "Where one person's happiness is essential for the other."
Very well done, please continue writing