All Comments on 'The Love of a Sister Ch. 01'

Well done. Looking forward to more.

A little to hard on the kink. For a man who's just learning of his sister and her friends lascivious behaviors. The whole pee fetish was too much. The foursome the anal play all that was perfect.

Great story - Trudy, Suzy & Katy with Tom continue playing together.

Suzy & Tom stay together bringing in one or more of the GF into their bed.

Thanks for writing.

Hope Tom put a baby in all 3 of them. Knock em up Tom.

Really great story. I very much hope there will be more.

Couldn't stop reading. Weel written and very captivating. Can't wait for next part... 5★

Oh yes, more please

Stopped reading early on when it became clear the author has a thing for pee

Lovin'this story. Hot sister and her friends, loving pussies, with a little water works thrown in. Five stars, and waiting for more. PS: who came in toms wife?

How good was that. Easy reading and well written, thanks.

Lovely, and what a dream!

Lovely, great story. AAAAAA++++++

Wow!

Too wonderful to imagine myself as a participant, it depressed me a bit.

Great lead up, "Oops!" she said and putting her forefingers in the legs of her bikini eased it away from her body. As she did so Tom glimpsed a flash of curly hair and possibly even labia. It was going to be a tough week in some ways he thought. I gave it a 5

It was good then borderline ridiculous then the whole peeing thing killed it. 2 stars.

Best Brother sister incest story i have read so far. And the orgy with sister and her two friends is cherry on top. Simply loved it. Masturbated. And cumed really hard. I wish i too had sister like her.

I rated it a 5 because of the pussy hair. I hate shaved and nasty stubble that always "ALWAYS" follows, sometimes with sickening pimples during the regrowth period. EASY FIVE RATING FOR THE HAIRY PUSSY COMMENTS. Like others, I did not care for the P or the PISS aspects of this story.

Dick!

I stroked so hard to this