by soul71
clever story idea. the scenes and particularly the sex scenes seemed disjointed to me - too much jumping around from scene to scene. I found myself skipping ahead. so you may want to work on that. but i'm looking forward to chapter 2
I am so looking forward to the next part. I like how this one started with the teasing of Eddy by the women in the family. The sex is hot but I agree that the last sex scene was awfully busy but none the less very hot. Oh and it seemed like Eddy didn't have any trouble with stamina.
Martin, Christen, Michelle, Rachel and Lula are from Strawter Family Does Incest Porn.
If you haven't already done so, you should check those chapters out. There you will get the needed background for the characters moving forward... hopefully it does move on to other chapters!!
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Just wondering when next chapter will be out. I really enjoyed both the series before this and this story.
i think a lot of us want a part 2 to this story. im actually kind of curious what eddie wants to ask martin and if the kids will pair off and be couples while still being with family. id like eddie to have a gf honestly. the kid deserves it. i really loved this one. i dont know if you read these but i really have a question about one of your other stories id like to ask you abou.
oh my god, i so loved this story. there should easily be 5 or 6 more chapters. i see a number of directions this story could continue in. i will be waiting......
Always enjoy your stories looking forward to the continuation of this series. I like Eddy's charter please develop this story line more.
I have a feeling the husband is going to screw something up and the wife is going to get really pissed and leave him, Eddie might start a relationship with Michelle and it will actually be good for both but still swap with eachothers siblings, Lauren and Christen will maybe start a romance, Martin will impregnate his mom sister Rachel and lulu while Eddie does his family.