All Comments on 'The Loves of a Summer Lifeguard'

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kensimoorekensimooreover 5 years ago
Outstanding Story!

Thank you for your work in creating an excellent story. Exceptionally well written with very few errors. Loved the character development and pace. Well Done!!

jonyoungaujonyoungauover 5 years ago
Loved it

Loved it and would love to hear more if you continue it with a autumn break

schmeisser248schmeisser248over 5 years ago

Loved it - it really does need an autumn break sequel. Kinda was hoping Dennis would betray her, disn’t expect it to be with that girl from the beginning. He just didn’t seem to be the person for Brooke. Tyler, on the other hand, totally sounds like her other half - good-looking, smart, gentle, a good person. Bring the sequel! :)

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