All Comments on 'The Luckiest Guy in the World Ch. 03'

More please and I like the first ending better than the second as it was more believable.

Glad you like the "real" ending - at least I think that's what you mean. (the "extra" ending was actually written first)

As for chapter 4, working on it (mostly in my head). Hope to have it ready in May.

and marrying Janine

Like where this is going can't wait for next chapter

A very well written and executed story! I cannot wait for the next chapter to be revealed. Please let me know if you need someone to proof, would be thrilled.

wheres part 4?

Get back to just mom and son. It's about the luckiest guy, not about some other guy.

I am old school in that I don't like it for anyone but the nasty son to have sex with his Mother. Of course, my sexual interaction with my Mother was only in my mind, ever.

Seeing as it's been over 6 years since chapter three was published, I think that we can forget about ever seeing chapter four. Too bad. It would have been nice to see how he finally made the leap from watching his mom have virtual and physical sex to actually having sex with her. He should change his name to betterlaterthannever. lol