All Comments on 'The Lustley's Ch. 01'

The story line is very good and the get together of Cheryl and her brother is great but Cheryl is too talkative, more specifics and less going on would make your story better. The imagination of how horny his sister is, her physical details and outward horny actions are very good. The part where she wanted her brother cock etc. was excellent. Maybe, the story should focus more on Big Brother helps his sister at school and more hard sex is a better story line. Much promises and I'd like to see more. Thanks !

Keep up the epic

Personally I think Cheryl was far too slutty. For stories such as these, there's clean, dirty, and outright slutty. Cheryl was beyond that final category. In a realistic scenario (as more stories should include), she would have every single STD ever discovered. She would be dying. And she STILL wouldn't care, because she only knows how to be a whore and nothing else. No other dimension to her character. Pathetic.

I also want to add that the name choices for the characters and the university were far from anything clever or interesting. Actually pick a real university and more common names next time.

Great start, keep it up

Glad she finally fucked her brother.

Not surprised she had fucked Dad.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Thought it was great. She is a hot little slut. Not surprised she fucked dad. Cant wait to hear about that. Please tell me she eats pussy too. A hot little slut like her likely does. Plus it would help her out of her jam. She could fuck, suck, and eat her way to a degree. Ignore the haters and keep writing.

Gosh, Cheryl is trailer park trash, what a slut.

She should have killed herself

Cheryl the slutty trash

This story is rushed and his sister is so trashy, it’s unbelievable

One trash story by a wannabe