All Comments on 'The Mage and the Bear Ch. 05'

I'll be honest, after waiting so long for another chapter, it really didn't move the story ahead at all. Nothing changed that we knew in the last chapter. I hope the story moves forward quite a bit in the next chapter, and that we see them learning more about one another so their relationship is progressing too. You have made it that they have an easy comraderie between them so it would be easy to forget that they don't really know one another. Keep writing.

Come on! U cant leave me hanging

Well, what ever the gold is it must be bad!

I hope to read to read the next chapter!

Because the is totally awesome!

needs to be finished