by ronde
Utterly amazing story. Well told and laid out. 5 stars aren't enough. Thank you for all of the hard work and dedication that had to have gone into a story like this.
That was an amazing piece of storytelling. And you do this so quickly. How can you know so much about such diverse things? 5*s, easy.
I don't know where or how you come up with ideas for your stories, but I am glad you do. Loved the story, great characters and story line. Looking forward to the next one.
Great as always. She should have gotten pregnant on the excursion, but otherwise everything made sense. 4.5*
Nice story, but not much real affection from Mandy? sounds like she was a nympho who would fuck anyone and everyone? No real reason on why she was so fixated on him?
Are you sure you are a one person or perhaps a whole enterprise..I believe you deserve a 1 billion stars for your episodes..
I thought it was the brown spider that caused it, from the discussion with the spider expert.
"Intense, long lasting painful erections", if it didn't kill you.
Interesting story, I'm amazed at your ability to come up with so may differing topics and you make them come alive. Another 5!!
Good job! Truly enjoyable! Nice mix of sex, romance, anthropology and Indiana Jones!
Got off to a slow start. I had a lot going on, too. But I “endeavored to perceiver” and finish the story.
It was great. I thought things were going to good for our intrepid travelers, so the hired help had to think with their brains between their legs. Exit our travelers. I am glad everything worked out well in end.
5 golds.
Take care