All Comments on 'The Magic Within Ch. 01'

Waiting for the next chapter

You're off to a good start, it will be interesting to see where this goes.

Great start. Looking forward to the following chapters.

You have got to be kidding us with that pre-story introduction. This is good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

As I started I was a little unsure, the first few paragraphs seemed to be full of short sentences, lots of full-stops or periods depending on where you are from. It initally felt like I was being bombarded with short snappy sentences. I carried on and did enjoy how the story was progressing and look forward to reading your next chapters.

I wasn't sure what to expect based on your intro but I'm glad I that I continued reading this fine story. Looking forward to more chapters, thanks for sharing!!

Thank you everyone for taking time to give me feedback on my writing! It motivates me to write better : ) Sirwoodcutter, I hear you there with the short sentences, I tend to do that on my first run-through, and don't notice the cadence until I reread my work after a week or so of not looking at it. I expect I'll do a reread of my first chapter at some point and polish it up. Thanks!

Hey, somehow I stumbled across your fic looking for an ao3 story that I lost, but I have to say it was the best thing to happen to me. Such a well-written story with likeable characters and fantastic plot. I immediately fell in love with the story and your writing. I hope you keep creating wonderful pieces of fiction, because it's worth reading all time.