All Comments on 'The Maid'

I found that I identified with the feelings of the guy! This is one very good story!

Luscious - that's the only word I can think of! This is a great story and I especially admire the way you set the scene, build up a sensitive and believable atmosphere and then leave the reader to exercise their imagination and fill in the details of the characters enjoyment of their time together. A very craftsman-like piece which I thoroughly enjoyed.

Please continue. It ended just when it seemed it should have carried on. Please share your fantasies you told her & have her share. Do them together, let us in on it! :)