All Comments on 'The Making of a Goddess Ch. 01'

Ariadne is hot! more more more!!

Very skillfully written. I look forward to seeing more.

Great start. I'm reading all your stuff and enjoy most of it. A suggestion: I found it distracting that after sleeping all night they didn't have to go pee, perhaps mention a chamber pot if there isn't an en suite. (Hope I spelled that right.) Looking forward to your next story! Please keep writing you are good.

I am loving this first chapter and can't wait to see what happens next