I really enjoyed the direction you went with the story. I hope to see more in the future. I like the way you write, in general, and will have to see what else you have posted on here.
Taking a break for a while. A lot of time and energy goes into every story but it’s disappointing to see that only 1 out a 1,000 readers will vote and only 1 out of 10,000 readers will leave a comment. Feedback is necessary to improve and it’s the only external reward for cr...