All Comments on 'The Making of a Slut Ch. 06'
by Just Plain Bob
- 26 Comments
Anonymousover 14 years agoLet me get this straight, she is pregnant and all of her friends and family know it. She is going away to have the child and if it is an interracial bastard she is giving up the child and coming home to be in a good family, what shit! If the baby is white she is bringing it home, also what shit. There is nothing good, erotic, or even interesting in this story of pure trash. Dump it!
Anonymousover 14 years agoI feel bad for Mike. Hard to believe that he wanted his friend to make his wife more sexually active. He goes off to Iraq and comes back and what she wants to do is continue to be a slut to everyone and he must accept it is beyond belief. He does accept her way and willingly. The writing was excellent, but it was not the ending I thought was appropriate. That is some group of poker friends that he has. Real loyal and true. That must of been some wimpy military outfit he was with. Thanks for sharing your story.
Anonymousover 14 years agoI know JPB write cuckold wimps stories but this?......I am speechless......!
Anonymousover 14 years agoOne of the worst stories you've ever written jpb. What a waste of anyone's time to read it.
labigqover 14 years agoBob, you are a great writer, but you really fucked this story up! This was worse than a Jerry Springer episode! Damn man, I can't believe you wrote 6 parts!!! LOL....
Anonymousover 14 years agoNice try but you already know that wimp ass male figures and ridiculously skank slut wives are a recipe for getting the emotional crowd going. But hey, at least you did a multiple chapter effort instead of your usual dogshit stories.
Anonymousover 14 years agoa comment halfway through the story in telling you that this is not your kind of story. read some other authors who write that kind of story. some are really good, they do exactly the same shit but somehow it's fun to read. this is not this is cold cruel without soul. no character from wife over husband and friend is worth breathing the air the poor kid from the story is breathing. I also can't understand any author who gets his sex kicks off with destroying some unborns future. you may hate adults but it's sick to play with kids. they depend on adults eventhough I almost never find any adults anyway in your stories. eventhough written as good as always, this time your story content leads to way under average.
sabajones623over 14 years agoMan that was fucked up... but at least the sex was hot. I'm more of a "catch the bitch cheating and make her and her lover pay" kind of guy but I love your writing!! Keep up the good work!
Anonymousover 14 years agoTHIS PIECE OF SHIT STORY IS SO BENEATH YOU... I DON'T HAVE THE SLIGHTEST IDEA WHY YOU WOULD EVEN WANT YOUR NAME ASSOCIATED WITH THIS TRIPE... YOU CAN DO SO MUCH BETTER THAN THIS...
moverover 14 years agoC'mon, you have to let us know how it turned out. Loved the tail, and for all you detracters? It's fiction for crying out loud!
A prolog please?
Anonymousover 14 years agoLong piece of shit, bobbie. When you really try you are as bad as anyone, is that what this was about, well congrats. this really sucked.
spbowlover 14 years agotime to finish it. this was weak compared to the rest of the story line. One more to wrap it up and do what you do amke it HOT..............
Anonymousover 14 years agoshe's willing to lose the man she loves but not her family...and this is a story? Everything about her is ruined including her self-respect and this is erotic? IF you were a man, I'ld say to go fuck yourself, but considering what kind of a closet fucking homo you are...yoou'ld enjoy it.
poolgirl9over 14 years agoI liked this. She was a slut and to be honest she wanted it. some guys are into go with it
Anonymousover 14 years agowhat going in country right now,wrong subject.with men fighting overseas and their wives home that fuck up.
Pistolpackinpeteover 14 years ago....each of the 6 times I did it. It's like I had no control over my hands or eyes.Weird.
Bfreetorunover 10 years agoHe deserves it. Yes, it's just a story but if... And I wish Mike the best and her, too.
Anonymousover 7 years agoNo one and nothing here to like. Hubby is a waste of oxygen. The wife and friend are much worse than that.
Anonymousalmost 7 years ago1* always for race mixxing aids-whores .
Anonymousover 6 years agoYou must really be bored, most of the time. And have enormous contempt for women, all of the time.
Nicealloverover 5 years agoI’d like to see some justice for this woman. It is a wonderful feeling to see the tables turned!0
Wendywants2Btakenalmost 2 years agoOnce we realize we are sluts and enjoy being a slut we can never go back to being a normal woman❤️❤️💋💋
Anonymous9 months agoShe got into being a slut but ended up caring for her husband’s. friend. What is wrong with her being a slut. Not every story must end with the slut being destroyed
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