All Comments on 'The Man in the Dark 'Laura's story''

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Every so often

Once in a great while you run onto an author that is so in tune with the subject matter of their story that it places the reader right in the scene as the story unfolds. This author tends to captivate the reader drawing them right in the room. The very detail of every experience in this short story from the lighting, the emotions, the sounds, feelings flavors and aromas were so well detailed it was if the reader was experiencing each and every one themselves. My only whish is that it had gone on a bit longer, but then maybe Mr. Peterswiftt will honor us with his experiences with the remaining thirty plus ten women he sanctifies. This one is beyond a solid *5, Please continue with each sequel.

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