All Comments on 'The Marine Bk. 02 Ch. 04'

I love where this is going. I look forward to every chapter.

Not sure who would think Nate was a sympathetic character...LOL! 5*

I'm not sure about this whether Nick's new character still has value. As a spy or a tale of investigation story it lacks background or has little to anchor it to any sort of reality, whereas the sex is not thrusting into our faces it just feels a bit cold, isolated. Then we have just been made to realise he can't let his old life go, trailing Hannah and Emily now that he has expressed his feelings for Jennifer and the doubts in his mind about how that will affect them both operationally. It's all a bit messy. Sorry 4 stars only.

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I have read this story so much. I have thought is great from the start. I can not wait for the next chapter in this and all your stories. Keep up the great work

Why do you keep calling him Nate when he is now Nick?? He is out in the field and his old identity is now a huge risk...