All Comments on 'The Marriage of Martin Hastings Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
booooobs

I want boobs on mrs Vargos, against his will

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
tired...

Getting tired of this. Nobody to even remotely like here. And pretty much everybody to dislike. And slooooooooow.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Martin needs to go off.

Sorry but if Martin really was as digusted by this then he should have gone off by now and flogged some one.He appears weak and hard to back

Thank you for the 2 pages and I still belive that you have a story that I look for ever couple of days

Regards

Tilliydog

rik581rik581almost 13 years agoAuthor
Hmmmm...........

Hello everyone. I wrote Martin Hastings with the intent of weaving fetish and BDSM themes through a story of a pliable yet determined young man who has found himself in the damnest situation. I may have it in the wrong category as a crossdresser he is not.

I did notice this chapter seemed to take down the ratings on all the previous chapters overnight. I'm new here so I may be seeing things sdrawkcab. Anyway, I decided to submit the next chapter 07 immediately and it is pending right now. I do hope you enjoy the new chapter.

This story will be continued in the future.

thanks all.

Rikki

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
please continue

thank you rik. please continue

creepyrjcreepyrjalmost 13 years ago

StIn my humble opinion he need to grow a small sack and attack his step mom. I'm sure hell get beaten for it but he might go down with a bit of a sack. Decent idea for a story...but the main is weaker than most.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Love it=)

But I love the parts when he is with Baron the most.

AlykattxAlykattxalmost 13 years ago
Love the Series

I just love this series and wish my life was that of Mrs Vargos. Maybe one day I will meet that kind of man. Keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
This story

is great. Please keep going.

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