All Comments on 'The Masquerade Ball'

by L.A. Wicker

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L.A. WickerL.A. Wickerover 15 years agoAuthor
Where is everybody?

Someone comment, besides me!

stevaroonistevarooniover 15 years ago
Good, dirty story

...and, unlike so many others, you seem to have kept track of consequences without either banging us on the head with them or otherwise "killing the mood".

bikerdude8730bikerdude8730over 15 years ago
wow more please

tHAT WAS SO FUCKING HOT I HAD TO MATERBATE

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Shes ready to tell mom to move over

the story was great and the Direction was profound. Although I rate it as a c+ the writers ability to stimulate the mind is improveing . I have a sister who claims to be a wicker. I dont know but LA your writing is improveing.

lormahoykyd2007lormahoykyd2007over 14 years ago
Well...

damn I thought mom was gonna come in drugged out of her mind, see what she gave up and have a total breakdown. Then they could shove the bitch in the loony bin and go on with their lives. Did I say I thought she was a bitch. I hate women that don't take care of their men since I always end up listening to the sob story before I tell them to go find someone else to fuck.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Wish more description of what wearing or what seeing and less talking. So much talk, talk, talk simply lost interest.

LonesomeBoy60LonesomeBoy604 months ago

The dumb cow could have overdosed her mom, stupid.

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