All Comments on 'The Masseur Pt. 02'

Very good, TryAnything! But please take note that the first paragraph uses first-person POV, like the first chapter, but unlike the remainder of the second chapter.

Who are Steven and Sheri? Was this copied from another story with name changes and you missed a couple? Hopefully one of the chapters will include a total massage for Jeri. Will it also branch out to include John?

Is there going to be more? If so, will it involve Sheri and maybe John since Joni brought it up during the first Chapter.

I loved it. The end with 'Jeri crouching in the bushes' is a bit of a cliff-hanger, but as it is over 1.5 years since you wrote it, I fear we will never know what happened after ... Anyway, keep it up, it is great reading!