All Comments on 'The Matchmaker'

With or without the sex this is a fantastic story!

As much as I like the erotic aspects of mind control, it is really nice to see a story where it's used for beneficial purposes. This is a tale well told, good plot and good characters, and a very good ending. I only wish I'd had him as a counselor in college!

Wait, what happened to the Hazel girl? I assume it means the severed relationship is Brooklyn with Hazel? what happened to the dinner then? That's cliffhanger!

I think there should be sequel for this, with more couples.

Well done! Brought tears to my eyes. Thank you.

I love the misdirect in det start, where brooklyn said she had a tough decision to make and she severed "that" relationship.. And we as the reader and the counselor thinks it's with the guy, but she is refering to her friendship with Hazel.

Very good indeed! Thank you!

A great thing that stood out was the counselor used his powers for the benefit of others. I wish we could’ve gotten more romance and sex from the other pairs like paisley and chad or from hazel or more from Brooklyn (she only had sex once). A lot was left open ended in my opinion

Best story I have read on this site. Not what you would expect for this forum but it was still the best.

One of your best!

As a nitpick, I think that a journalism major and rising star would know enough to say "hung with a zucchini" and "hung with a toothpick" rather than hung "like" a zucchini or toothpick...since neither are hung at all. But that's obviously minor.

Thanks for the story!

5 stars

wow you know this is your best work ever

so erotic so natural so hot so beautiful i loved every line of it

how carefully he decides who should end up with whom its beautiful he knows everyone too well perfect halves to become one together

he actually felt so bad for pairing brook coz she never asked for it he shed tears

i wonder who has stolen the councellers heart

wow thanku please write more

Vapid, shallow, self-centred bitches like Hazel really make my skin crawl and my blood boil. Of course Brooklyn is friends with morons like her. I sincerely hope people like her get used up and spat out by the world; it's nothing less than they deserve. Maybe it will teach them humility if they're lucky. She just seemed to be endlessly horrible for no reason other than he was, what, fat? Who hurt her!?