by brenda_69
I read all three installments of your story, and i hope you continue on with it. Very good for a first submission.
I love the naturalistic quality of your characters. Very real. As for the slow, sultry detail of the sex? Perfect. (Filled with great tips, too. Even for a guy.) I loved each characters evaporating shyness. Quite good. I would love to see Brenda turn the tables in the next passage (if there is one....)
When I reached this part of the story I had unclasped my bra and slid off my panties...my fingers going down to spread my plump labia lips. I was so wet! I eagerly pushed three fingers into my soaking wet vagina. My juices ran out of my pussy and down my legs as I reached my orgasm. It was so intense that I felt I was going to pee....but instead I ejaculated warm clear fluid from my vagina making a huge wet spot on my bed sheets My hands went up to my double-D boobies to caress them--my nipples were so erect! This is what your story did to me!
An incredible story! I hope you come back and add to it someday!
Thank you,
L
Just read all three chapters. It was a sexy good read. This third installment was nine years ago and there's been no other stories from this author since. Hope everything is well with her.