All Comments on 'The Mbayo Clinic Ch. 01'

Great story. Very Hot. I think it prob has alot to offer in wisdom to people trying to get pregant. I am sure it is true that they begin to see it as a job, the stress it puts on them and the connection between mind/body is has a monumental effect on us.

Well written and an interesting plot. I look forward to reading more.

The characters are very believable as well as the story line. A nice paced story that neither drags or is too fast.

I'll be watching for the next chapter.

hope this doesn't turn into typical backstabing

hope you can continue to keep it interesting and original

to pervert people into believing groupsex is the most natural thing to do ?

unrealistic is understated