All Comments on 'The Meeting'

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GenevraGenevraover 8 years ago
Wonderful

Simply perfect. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story

This was a great story, I like the detail and how you were patient with it. Your writing can not only edge the character on, but can edge your readers (or at least me?) On top. Not to mention I loved how it went from rough and pleasurable painful to being a less rough, and a little bit of care into it. 👏🏻

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Your writing is intriguing

Heartshope, You have writing style that is descriptive and building. This is a very interesting story line with twists and bends, I found my self on the edge of my seat waiting to see what was coming next, to see what the woman was going to endure next. Her bravery and sense of adventure was exhilarating.

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Married submissive who sometimes Tops her husband (a Switch), but mostly I am a cat mom working to build a writing career. I am trained in photography. My hobbies include video games, crochet, painting, and true crime.

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