by heartshope
This was a great story, I like the detail and how you were patient with it. Your writing can not only edge the character on, but can edge your readers (or at least me?) On top. Not to mention I loved how it went from rough and pleasurable painful to being a less rough, and a little bit of care into it. 👏🏻
Heartshope, You have writing style that is descriptive and building. This is a very interesting story line with twists and bends, I found my self on the edge of my seat waiting to see what was coming next, to see what the woman was going to endure next. Her bravery and sense of adventure was exhilarating.
A reader