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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Romance-y

This fic has a sweet, light atmosphere to it, and I am looking forward to see where you will take this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Looking forward to the next chapter...

Great first chapter, but I'm sure there's more to this story...

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 4 years ago
The fantasy seduction seemed SUDDEN to me...

A clearer transition?

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People have asked about my name - petitmort. It's a bastardization of la petite mort or little death in French, a literary term for orgasm. I am part French, part Italian, living in the US now and working as a writer and editor. I love travel, film, nature, good food and win...

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