All Comments on 'The Mentor Ch. 03'

thanks for this great series, keep it going.

I'm glad you liked it. I had a good time getting to know the characters. I wrote it hoping to generate some anticipation, even suspense, by delaying the consummation as long as possible. Hopefully, that was successful. Incidentally, I was inspired by a friendship with an extremely talented Literotica writer, sleeplessgurl.

I've so enjoyed your writing ... looking forward to more.

Leto

I really enjoyed the story. I also learned a lot about writing too. Nothing like a very entertaining class. I love romance and love happy endings. There are to many unhappy ones in our real world. Hmmm what's real. Which world is imaginary and which one is real?

You surprised me twice...Then touched all the bases.

My suggestion? It's more fun with her leading him.

Better than him "taking charge"...and the home stretch sex

seems overtold? And entirely predictable.

Let her be "in charge" all the way through.

Thank you...I love you...Will you marry me?

Does it help that I'm a Native San Franciscan? :+)))

Brilliant - the best lit erotica writers explore human relationships and sexuality. You are amazing!

OMG…this story is so HOT!!

Six stars, very well written AND oh so hot! Wow.

Very nicely constructed and great characterisation. Definitely very hot and enjoyable. Great writing. Thanks. 5+ stars