All Comments on 'The Mermaid'

What an absolutely GREAT story!

Hope you write more like these!!!

VERY Erotic and kinky....

Sea cucumbers, when aggitated (or sucked) do not release their "seed." They are vomitting out their internal organs. Otherwise nice twist on mermaid.

Great story, had a scary intensity to it as well. Awesomely well written, and don't mind tbe previous reader about how the sea cumcubers release their organs, although it may be true it perhaps would of dimished the fictional story. (Techicially since it is fiction of course it could be seed)

Regardless, excellent story, scary and erotic.

That is really hot! You should have someone else encounter the mermaid.

Sequel please! :)

Wish he lived and there was a sequel

I guess this mermaid was half succubus.

I’ve read this story dozens of times & it always gets me so turned on. I would love for the mermaid to feed from a female scientist.

One of the most hot stories I've read. I would love to see a sequel!

i am surprised it didn't have the EROTIC HORROR tag added to this. nice job.