All Comments on 'The Messenger Ch. 02'

Amazing story beautifully crafted and very well written. Fabulous effort. Keep them coming, loved it.

Cagivagurl

Stunning imagery, gorgeous world building, word wizardry from one of the top five writers on the site. Full marks. Randi.

This story was brilliant, in a disturbing way. The writer is obsessed with life after the end of days as we know them. What a great addition to Chapter 1. Please write the third chapter before seeking much needed help!

Please continue

Great companion to the first chapter!

5

Tremendous! Having re-read Chapter 1 before reading this, I started out a bit confused how it fit into the theme. Now I know and it has made it all the more impressive. Really outstanding story. I can’t argue with Randi, you’re one of the best.

Nice ending

What a world you have created. Loved Ch 1 and now with h Ch 2 taking the story to new heights it is really a spectacular world you are creating. I am so looking forward to a Ch 3.

Two chapters... 10 stars. Great story the first time. Great story again. You own this universe.

Hooked

Found this one better than part 1, even though it was a good read just found this one better. Lol forward to part 3

darn

the universe is gloomy and depressing

The first part was much better

More, please.

Another SiFi !Another good tale. A very bleak world you have created for readers to get into to follow your tale. Entertaining and ready for the story to continue...5 stars...JZK

I appreciate the parallel between MC and the reader. We are both stumbling confused about what is going on and the mechanisms of this world.

It has a bit of a Star Wars vibe, starting in a desolate desert, being chosen, and topped off with battling a family member.

The story left me feeling like I left a new restaurant that had a menu I didn’t understand, but ordered anyway. It was good, but utterly bizarre.

Well written but, to me it was a little confusing. Sorry but I don't normally read sci-fi /fantasy but some of it was good. Thanks for the story, will always read your stories unless they are bdsm or gay. Mel B known as Hornydevil47