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by TheSleepingKing

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dirtyricekingdirtyricekingover 4 years ago
HOT DAMN!!

This was HAWT!! We gotta know what happens next!

BillyslateBillyslateover 4 years ago
SEX SEX SEX!!!!!

Just one of the "Hottest" 1-page stories I have read in a long time!!! A 5*-STAR performance all the way & definitely Bring On Pt. 02!

MaonaighMaonaighover 4 years ago
But...

A very good short story but... it was too short. You can write and write well and the potential is there for you to have made a far longer story from the basic idea. Slow burn with background stories on your protagonists would have made a far more interesting tale. Give it a whirl next time.

Ash_legendAsh_legendover 4 years ago
Please don't put engine oil in anyone's vagina, vulva or anus

Ever. It's not hot, it's actually super irresponsible.

maddictmaddictalmost 4 years ago

Darcy, can I see you for a minute.

I've been reviewing video from the shop last night and, well, you going to need some lube

Candy_Kane54Candy_Kane54almost 3 years ago

I don't know how I missed this but I'm glad I found it. I loved the reference to LA Story - "72 degrees and sunny."

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Happy to be sharing stories people enjoy reading. Enjoy reading stories other people like to share. Story suggestions are welcome. As is conversation. If I have a character you like, what mischief should they get up to next?