All Comments on 'The Middle Aged Wife'

Seems like only half a story. Will there be more? How about a piece where Suzette dumps her stupid husband.

Give up writing right now and save yourself any more embarrassment. Please!!!

you are one sorry piece of shit! I gave this story a 5

I think that you have a good story line. I do think that you could add more detail and expand the story a bit. Don't worry about the harsh comments. Most people aren't perfect writers over night. It takes practice and changes to learn how to get things right. I look forward to seeing more from you. If you want help email me at justaguylooking4afriend@yahoo.com

You're story had me hooked, there needs to be more!

The story had promise. I liked the idea of Tony wanting her to be sexier around other men. I liked the idea of him getting help from a friend. Keep writing but slow down. I think the story in your mind would take longer to put on paper. Just slow down and read what you write then read it again and again until you have the story written the way you envision it in your mind. I wanted more detail of every action. I'll give you a 4 because it was a good start.

This story seems like it is written by a 14 year old.

Good to see yr work again, it's been too long