by Iwantyourfantasies
How about a chapter 2 with some Mom swapping and more details about what happened the rest of the week with other Moms and sons?
beulahthebrit, Sadly, I don't have a son, (nor a daughter, to be honest), but from my experience as a 6th form teacher, fucking is all their good for. More please, decent start, 3stars.
What the fuck is up with the dot dot dot dots? Take an English lit class then come back and write your stories!