All Comments on 'The Milking Table'

by Pollipi_Mipanti

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ChefofthefutureChefofthefutureover 2 years ago

Awesome story, waiting for Part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A lovely, well written fantasy

chytownchytownover 2 years ago

****HOT Azz read. Thanks for sharing.

GambierroninGambierroninover 2 years ago

I’m loving Melissa’s adventures. Can’t wait to read more of your very well written stories. Thank you for sharing.

Pollipi_MipantiPollipi_Mipantiover 2 years agoAuthor

thanks for the encouragement everyone - Yes, Melissa is getting a bit fed up of being good and dutiful - and I thinkk Sandy would like to join in...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Your sentences get a bit out of control in places...

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Run on sentences galore and almost no punctuation.

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