by Nikkiejanes
Such a shame a meaningful encounter was never repeated. Not only do many boys dream of their mothers, they also dream of their sisters. And vise versa.
5 Stars.
Fun Story...
I don't see how they could not continue fucking each other after that encounter. Great story, I really enjoyed it!
as there will no other chapter
as how is date went and continue with his mom and sis
also there was no mention of precaution or pill well he came in his mom
Wow that was beautiful, remind me of home with mom and my 2 sisters. Hoping for a continue story.
When cum up in your mom did she end up getting pregnant from you and did fuck your sister again knock her.i knocked my mom and sister sametime but they each end up with three kids each
Now if you truely read this story,
you will read about the luckyest
boy ever. He's being tough the art
of love makeing, by his mom,
and sister.
ps. Hope you keep it going.
5 big ones ..THANKS..
Very nicely done; you have managed to create a fulfilling story arc in the short form, which is always a challenge. I enjoyed that you started at the immediate beginning of the action; not to say I do not appreciate a lengthy set-up, but this story did not require it and you wisely left it out. Speaking of things I appreciate, the ending is perfectly done. It isn't necessary to always leave things open for a sequel, as the sequels are rarely, if ever, as good as the original.
I enjoyed the aspect of competition, and I very much enjoyed the pacing. The dialogue was, shall we say, a little "meh", but really, darling, who reads smut for the witty dialogue? The rest of the story was well-done enough that I was easily able to overlook this minor weakness and award you five stars. Good work.
but the ending wasn't. A 4. Judging by your bio there won't be a sequel. Don't worry, sequels are mostly disappointing at best. Good job.
However, I wanted to see Kassie get fucked also. You left off letting Kassie get fucked in her sweet virgin, teenage ass.
Love to see another chapter with Kassie , Mom, and brother
More!!!!! Kassie needs her turn and I would assume trying to outdo her mother.
Was confusing. Sometimes it’s like a book, third person, others you are writing as the brother or sister.