All Comments on 'The Miller Family'

by Nikkiejanes

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 4 years ago
Remarkable memory.

Such a shame a meaningful encounter was never repeated. Not only do many boys dream of their mothers, they also dream of their sisters. And vise versa.

DomJ69DomJ69over 4 years ago
Good Job

I enjoyed your piece of whimsy and it made me smile.

cslt1cslt1over 4 years ago
"This was the time for things to stop. Thankfully they didn't."

5 Stars.

Fun Story...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
you took this from the movie

You took this from the movie even the names.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Not repeated?

I don't see how they could not continue fucking each other after that encounter. Great story, I really enjoyed it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
did not enjoy the end

as there will no other chapter

as how is date went and continue with his mom and sis

also there was no mention of precaution or pill well he came in his mom

HeyAllHeyAllover 4 years ago
Hot story

Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Definitely needs

A 2nd chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Thank you

Wow fantastic Thank you,had me so hard I had to cum

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Just like back home

Wow that was beautiful, remind me of home with mom and my 2 sisters. Hoping for a continue story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hot

This really needs a second chapter, make it happen please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Yea need a chapter where he fucks his sister.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

When cum up in your mom did she end up getting pregnant from you and did fuck your sister again knock her.i knocked my mom and sister sametime but they each end up with three kids each

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
A lot of action, in such a short story. !!!!! ^*!^*!^*!

Now if you truely read this story,

you will read about the luckyest

boy ever. He's being tough the art

of love makeing, by his mom,

and sister.

ps. Hope you keep it going.

5 big ones ..THANKS..

AnnNaniasAnnNaniasover 4 years ago

Very nicely done; you have managed to create a fulfilling story arc in the short form, which is always a challenge. I enjoyed that you started at the immediate beginning of the action; not to say I do not appreciate a lengthy set-up, but this story did not require it and you wisely left it out. Speaking of things I appreciate, the ending is perfectly done. It isn't necessary to always leave things open for a sequel, as the sequels are rarely, if ever, as good as the original.

I enjoyed the aspect of competition, and I very much enjoyed the pacing. The dialogue was, shall we say, a little "meh", but really, darling, who reads smut for the witty dialogue? The rest of the story was well-done enough that I was easily able to overlook this minor weakness and award you five stars. Good work.

LegallySaneLegallySanealmost 4 years ago
Good story

but the ending wasn't. A 4. Judging by your bio there won't be a sequel. Don't worry, sequels are mostly disappointing at best. Good job.

bshell47bshell47almost 4 years ago
AWESOME STORY

However, I wanted to see Kassie get fucked also. You left off letting Kassie get fucked in her sweet virgin, teenage ass.

Love to see another chapter with Kassie , Mom, and brother

DarqDomDarqDomover 3 years ago

More!!!!! Kassie needs her turn and I would assume trying to outdo her mother.

thorbetthorbetabout 3 years ago

Great story, a real precum producer

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

More!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very sexy, got me to cum!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It was hot made me cum rubbing my cock

HotChatChef56HotChatChef566 months ago

Was confusing. Sometimes it’s like a book, third person, others you are writing as the brother or sister.

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I'm mature and longtime happily married. I started to write erotic fiction in the begining of Feb 2018 after reading it for a few years on e-books, and thought I have enough ideas I could write like this,then found this site and a few others of the same so had the incentive to...