All Comments on 'The Mind of a Teenager'

Great beginning, More Please!! and more of The Sibling Diaries please!!

This will make a nice series.

THAT POOR DOG!! He left it chasing its tail!

Super fun new story. Love the fun and faster pacing

Very good start for 5 stars!

turning this into a long series that ends with him building a large company or eventually dominating the earth would be great but im too ambitious everytime i read a mc story lol

Very nice story with nice plot and I like that how dominant the mail character in this story is overall this story was very good and deserved 5 stars, one does not see this much effort put into stories these days. This story was great and must be made into a series as it has the potential to do so. keep it up writer

Get an editor. It seems that the only people who like your stories can't spell either. (mail: what you get in your postal box compared to male: a genetic predisposition assigned at birth - penis or no penis)

Tommy tales is obviously a teenager with big sister issues himself. He should learn to spell and punctuate before he wastes good ideas with poor English. He should also get an adult editor to remove the embarrassing immaturity that comes through on occasions.

This was so poorly written grammar wise it is laughable. Did you sleep during English class or what?

Anyone who says this story is GREAT has real low standards.

This story has the potential to become a great story, where he grows into the dominant male of the house, serving to sexually enslave his sisters and mother, even to the point of breeding them.

He may not have forced her to do something with mind control, but he did force her with the threat of it. Either way it’s rape, no matter you immaturely try to make it sound like it isn’t. If you want to write about how he raped his sister just own up to it and stop trying to make it sound consensual, it wasn’t.