All Comments on 'The Mind of a Teenager Ch. 02'

Excellent work looking forward to more

The chapter was more like a puny kud that read an old Charles Atlas advertisement in a comic book, pump iron a few days and fancied himself a Mr Universe muscled dude. The beginning showed promise then continued and ended like a teenager getting revenge. You’ve git potential, listen to the voice in your head and write

What a repugnant protagonist. Not sure if this is intended or not, but threatening someone at gunpoint to do something (an anology) is not free will, similarly, blackmail is not free will.

I hope this little shit gets what's coming to him.

Crazy fun chapter.

Super hot, I really hope you write more !

Great 2 chapter story fro 5 stars each!

I dont think this is reluctance man.....this is straight up mind control rape..... u might need to change tags, to non consent instead....

part three plz