All Comments on 'The Mind's Eye Ch. 02'

waiting for ch 3

Maybe he isn’t using too much power but has diabetes and his numbers drop to around 40 which weakens him to the point of passing out. Been there and it sucks.

This story is excellent as are so many of your stories. They may take awhile to be posted but they have been completely worth the wait. Thanks for another one.

Good continuation... good pacing.

Ends a bit abruptly, but not inappropriately. Nicely done.

Can't wait for the next chapter...

I just found your writing, this is my first story, I look forward to more chapters, and to checking in to some of your other work.