All Comments on 'The Mind's Eye'

Great quick read hopefully you turn this into another series.

Sooooo looking forward to the continuation!

Great start to what could be one of your best. I’m awaiting the conclusion of lost world that is your best yet.

So glad to have another Pars001 story come along!!!!

Nice! Will we be getting a new installment of Lost Empire, soon? Not that this story is bad, but it's been awhile.

T

Interesting start. I’ll have to follow up see where you go with this.

5*

Tc

This is good.... Good concept, developing well ...

I'm a LONG time SciFi reader, and your style is sparse but effective.

Reminds me of Keith Laumer - no frills, lots of action, paced with little rest - just plain fun.

Thank you for not bogging down in techno-babble detail.

I see chapter two is out and look forward to more.