All Comments on 'The Mist of Time Ch. 03'

and this new one starts to roll nicely.

A bit short to be a full chapter but enough is happening. Enter yet another young lady! The land sounds wonderful.

than a chapter. but the stage is being set.

personality and sass

to read.

thanks

Longer chapters would have helped build the story a lot better, rather than the staccato style short ones. Note to budding authors - short chapters can irritate readers, we just get into it and bang, “same time same place next week batfans”, then whilst we’re waiting we find something else more interesting. Give us something to get our teeth into!

Superb writing - laying down the clues to the outcome. A joy to read for a second (or even a seventh) time