All Comments on 'The Mist of Time Ch. 05-06'

The story is just beginning to get interesting. There are a good many other details needed to flesh out this story. So far you are keeping it interesting. Thanks

Lively dialogue. Romantic interest on the horizon. Adelaide and Rupert? Ghosts? Fun, but definitely fantasy, I think.

K67, you did it again. Another story developing complexity of characters and suspense, chapter by chapter.

with another tease

thanks

Yes I'm enjoying the series. However who is Adelaide? Annabel didn't introduce to Daniel. She just disappeared?

Re-reading this tale, it foreshadows your magnificent tale about Abby Tregonny. Both are so well written - believable characters although those in Abby are more developed - and your description of landscape almost as detailed. Excellent craftsmanship - thank you!